Rabu, 26 November 2014

My Last April Mop Day


               This is about my last experience to celebrate the April Mop day. It was in 2012 when I was in the third grade of senior high school. At that time, my best friends, Andri, Sri , Vita, Rika, Anis, and I liked to lie with everyone in our school. Some people who didn't know about April Mop, would be angry to us. It could make us very happy because we were success kidding them. After we graduated from senior high school, we never celebrate it with the people around us. Because of that situation, 2012 April Mop becomes the last April Mop experience that my best friends and I have together.

2 komentar:

  1. This is good, Sami. It would be bice if you can capitalize each word for 'senior high school'.
    Also on the line 8, I think we don't need coma after April Mop.
    The rest is good, keep writing. ^^

    BalasHapus
  2. Thanks Ratna.. I do love your correction ^_^

    BalasHapus